Thursday, September 30, 2010
2nd Peer Viewing
During the peer viewing in class on Tuesday, I found that paper is lacking a bold solution. After we completed peer viewing in class, we moved onto an activity that we were assigned to do in groups. Revision. Looking through the revisions we were assigned to, I learned how I could fix my paper enormously. As Jessica & I worked on our powerpoint for our revisions, I now have some useful insight. I have a pretty clear idea as to what I need to change about my paper, now I have to work in the revisions into my paper to improve it. I'm starting to like the peer viewing more. It was nice to get input from another person in the class. Overall, I'm glad we did this again in class. The revisions at first seemed "boring" and wordy explanations.. but when I started working on our powerpoint, it made me realize how helpful it really is when you apply it to your own work.
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Even though they may take a while to apply the revisions to your own paper, they do provide helpful information. Thank you, our presentation we both were a little nervous about because we weren't exactly sure if we were doing the way you wanted it.
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